I went for a walk.But I didn't know it was to windy.
You just want to fly but it just to
hot.
When your mum wakes you up you cant help
it.Its just too early
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You just want to fly but it just to
hot.
When your mum wakes you up you cant help
it.Its just too early
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hi abby i´m pippa. I like the really bear one. Remember your full stop because on the bear one there was not a full stop.
ReplyDeleteHi Abby I really like your blog post about funny animals. Maybe next time you could ask a buddy to read your story before you publish. How long did this blog take you?
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